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Re: wow
Thanks Smittenheimer!! I am glad that some of the intensity of this translated
posted by
lionreign
on July 25, 2008 at 2:34 AM
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wow
I was lost in this - at first like a hunter chasing the prey and then thunder of sweet innocence loss - amazing
posted by
Smittenheimer
on July 23, 2008 at 5:45 PM
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Re: Awesome use of images and words...
Thanks Chris, glad you liked it
posted by
lionreign
on July 16, 2008 at 12:36 AM
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Re: Soul_Builder
Oh she will roam anyway, and so will I, but some times it is nice to rest with one another
posted by
lionreign
on July 16, 2008 at 12:35 AM
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Re: Sam
Thank you
posted by
lionreign
on July 16, 2008 at 12:34 AM
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Re: Nice write
Thanks pawn
posted by
lionreign
on July 16, 2008 at 12:34 AM
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Re: You will find one day ...
Thanks afzal - it helps that when I am awake I do know where she is
posted by
lionreign
on July 16, 2008 at 12:33 AM
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Re: NiteTide
Now you're just trying to make my head swell, aren't you? Thank you
posted by
lionreign
on July 16, 2008 at 12:33 AM
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Re: When the time is right and when your wanderings are over my friend
Thank you, dear one
posted by
lionreign
on July 16, 2008 at 12:31 AM
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Awesome use of images and words...
I especially liked the 'monoliths of glass and stone', 'pestilential silence' and the likening of thunder to the closing of a tomb's door. Very well done, indeed! - Chris
posted by
Marineair
on July 15, 2008 at 6:00 PM
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Awww....I completely forgot about the time difference. Well, when you wake, there's a poem waiting. LOL.
posted by
NiteTide
on July 15, 2008 at 4:26 PM
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I'd sooner give up and let her roam. But, no return!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on July 15, 2008 at 3:57 PM
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Such poignancy in the search! Bravo! sam
posted by
sam444
on July 15, 2008 at 2:29 PM
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haha, I made the poem in the 5 minutes before I had work. Take a look!
posted by
NiteTide
on July 15, 2008 at 8:08 AM
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Nice write
posted by
Sudanym_
on July 15, 2008 at 7:28 AM
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You will find one day ...
posted by
afzal50
on July 15, 2008 at 5:16 AM
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You, yourself, are an amazing poet to behold. This was such a powerfully saddening write - I wanted to just call out, "You'll find her when you least expect it!!" When poetry elicits reactions from me, like that, it means you're a fantastic writer to me. And you are. Hands down.
posted by
NiteTide
on July 15, 2008 at 4:47 AM
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When the time is right and when your wanderings are over my friend
when you stop looking, that's the time she'll appear..... Thank you and God bless
posted by
mariaki
on July 15, 2008 at 3:48 AM
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