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Written so beautifully, with an eye for the wild. Where wild and innocent shadows leap.
posted by
yellowrose55
on July 15, 2008 at 9:04 PM
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Okay, ignore my first comment. I missed that part about "short poems" in the blog description. LOL!! So, silly me!!! So.....I'll give my real comment on the poem now (I only said niiice, because I thought you might have put it in the wrong place)...your inspiration turned into something really grand in this poem. The dark concept in this poem played with my emotions and I felt almost scared to read to the end. Bravo~
posted by
NiteTide
on July 15, 2008 at 8:53 PM
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Not to be a simpleton, but, wow! This is just wonderful... I love ...
Cry Wolf!
Indeed
For widespread slaughter approaches...
When will it end?
posted by
VictoriaP
on July 15, 2008 at 8:52 PM
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LOL, Chris, should this poem be in your haiku section? Niiiiice poem though!!
posted by
NiteTide
on July 15, 2008 at 8:47 PM
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