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Beautiful You have talent, a lot of it! Great going!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on July 17, 2008 at 3:10 PM
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Wow!
are you sure you're not from a more archaic time? this one was excellent, and it captured a monk's life so colorfully (which is a feat since it can be a rather colorless life).
posted by
Luz_Briar
on July 17, 2008 at 2:35 PM
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Fantastic and I loved the rhyme scheme; it so enhaced the cadence! This was especially profound for me:
Clothed in wonder to embrace,
And make the world a better place. Right on! sam
posted by
sam444
on July 17, 2008 at 11:43 AM
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So very good.
Yes indeed, enlightenment comes at the most unexpected time and in the most unexpected ways. May you always be surrounded by the Light skye
posted by
skye08
on July 17, 2008 at 10:11 AM
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You know dad, have you asked mom recently about turning to the cloth? I hope so..I know she will have something to say about it..LOL..Just awesome Dad!
posted by
Wigopa_
on July 16, 2008 at 11:35 PM
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Very well written, I like it, Joseph
posted by
Kayzzaman
on July 16, 2008 at 9:44 PM
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Beautiful..
posted by
VictoriaP
on July 16, 2008 at 9:41 PM
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your fine poetry dear sir, is highly commendable....
posted by
__Purple_Mermaid11__
on July 16, 2008 at 8:55 PM
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I have a very close friend who gave up everything somewhat reluctantly to become a monk at Notre Dame. This reminded me very much of him. Thanks for sharing! - Chris
posted by
Marineair
on July 16, 2008 at 8:14 PM
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Oh but I so enjoyed and applaud you Joe...this again, another masterpiece. A 'Monk' --- I've known several in my lifetime.
Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on July 16, 2008 at 7:35 PM
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Fantastic enlightenment!! I could easily envision the monk's new goal as if it were my own. Terrific!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
posted by
NiteTide
on July 16, 2008 at 7:27 PM
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