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Nice short! It sounds live a dream reliving a trauma, scary or what? well done.
posted by
merkie
on July 18, 2008 at 1:38 PM
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Fine effort! sam
posted by
sam444
on July 17, 2008 at 1:26 PM
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I thought Haiku was a three-line thing?
posted by
Straightforward
on July 17, 2008 at 6:47 AM
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powerful stuff
this is fabulous - I felt almost like the nightmare was mine
posted by
lionreign
on July 17, 2008 at 6:24 AM
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Thank you all so much!
Please, please...if you've enjoyed this at all, the emotions, the intent, the imagery. Please read Endgame on my other blog. It's a series of eight poems. The first two are up, and the third will be posted around 5 pm (CST). Thanks for reading! - Chris
posted by
Marineair
on July 17, 2008 at 6:10 AM
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Marineair
Loved reading this. I read it twice. The second time I read it the part that says, "I remember being here" well, I heard it as if someone were whispering it.
posted by
Hilow
on July 17, 2008 at 6:05 AM
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Beautiful
posted by
Kayzzaman
on July 17, 2008 at 5:22 AM
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It's simply nice
posted by
afzal50
on July 17, 2008 at 4:53 AM
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