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Urban sprawl has to be controlled...
...or it will be our undoing.
Excellent poem with an important message.
posted by
metalrat
on July 19, 2008 at 2:42 PM
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"We've never applied all that we've learned..."
No we haven't.....
That was one of the most tragic things I think I've ever read. I too am at a loss for words...
posted by
Kobriel
on July 19, 2008 at 10:03 AM
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I am lost for words
Chris you are a lyrical god of conflict poetry, the integrity of this is matched only by the power... I feel like you ran over my mind with a furied steamroller, etched in tragic beauty.
posted by
lionreign
on July 19, 2008 at 6:46 AM
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Wonderful visuals, impressive vocabulary.
posted by
Gardner_3
on July 19, 2008 at 4:26 AM
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Very, very awesome!
I love it! It is the truth too. totally Awesome.
posted by
Kolekshuns
on July 18, 2008 at 9:55 PM
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I can't tell you
how much I enjoyed this! i don't think i've read you before, so glad u left a comment, i'm terrible at keeping up on this. "we mindlessly wait the death of the sun" and how we "haven't applied what we've already learned." such powerful phrases. I never understood how the world doesn't devote all efforts to the environment and NASA, the two most important goals for our species. Bravo. Here's a rose from our world
posted by
BigD81
on July 18, 2008 at 9:41 PM
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Oh when will we ever learn mate. Take care, BCA, “Top of the Stairs” 
posted by
BC-A
on July 18, 2008 at 8:36 PM
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Re: NiteTide
Thank you, Mindy. Kind of you to say so after 'lacerating' me so much on your
own blog...;)
posted by
Marineair
on July 18, 2008 at 2:21 PM
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"lacerated silence".......a perfect ending.
posted by
NiteTide
on July 18, 2008 at 2:06 PM
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