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Oh, that was beautifully well done...
Nice job!
- Chris
posted by
Marineair
on July 20, 2008 at 5:42 PM
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fantastic poem
The style of the poem so perfectly fits the subject. I loved this
posted by
lionreign
on July 20, 2008 at 11:40 AM
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Re: Sam444
Hi Sam. I am so pleased that you enjoyed the poem, and came back for a second reading. I am truly honored. Thank you so much for your support.
Joe 
posted by
SFJoseph
on July 19, 2008 at 7:04 PM
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Re: NiteTide
I am glad you found "Faerie" to be intriguing. I liked your "romantic thoughts" about how the poem could be expanded. A very good idea. I may have to try that one day. As always, thank you for visiting, and reading, and for the kind and helpful comments.
Joe
posted by
SFJoseph
on July 19, 2008 at 6:56 PM
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Hi Joe! This poem is so cool I just had to come back and read it again. Have a great evening! sam
posted by
sam444
on July 19, 2008 at 5:12 PM
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This is a fantastic poem. It gave a feel for an epyllion. You are masterful with quatrains as well. I enjoyed the rhyme scheme and it gave much impetus to the cadence! Right on! Bravo! sam
posted by
sam444
on July 19, 2008 at 8:25 AM
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Excellent .....thanks
posted by
Shams-i-Heartsong
on July 19, 2008 at 5:43 AM
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This was quite intriguing!! I felt like the son should have fought for the throne though...LOL, my silly little romantical thoughts at play! Excellent poem as usual!!
posted by
NiteTide
on July 18, 2008 at 10:45 PM
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Marvellous
posted by
Kayzzaman
on July 18, 2008 at 10:16 PM
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fantastic rhyme scheme. as always, great subject choice, too.
posted by
Luz_Briar
on July 18, 2008 at 8:56 PM
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