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yep, no letup here..keep it going Luz.....
posted by
Rumor
on July 20, 2008 at 12:58 PM
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haha! Bhak, Sarah is nothing like me, for the most part. but i am aiming for real-life realism, so it's good that's what you guessed. thanks so much for reading
posted by
Luz_Briar
on July 20, 2008 at 12:27 PM
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I must admit that I am impressed at what I read here. The style is simply grand and very evocative. The story has a ring of a real-life experience, but whether so or not, I'll come back to read the previus ones too. Kudos Luz
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
on July 19, 2008 at 10:43 PM
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I am very pleased! sam
posted by
sam444
on July 19, 2008 at 6:02 PM
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Hello Hollie! I have left an important comment at parts 15 & 16 on Salaah. I will wait to hear from you. Have a great evening. sam
posted by
sam444
on July 19, 2008 at 5:07 PM
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