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Re: Luz Briar
Thank you for the 
. I am glad that you enjoyed my version of the Piggies.
Joe 
posted by
SFJoseph
on July 20, 2008 at 6:26 PM
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Re: I laughed out loud at the last stanza
Thank you. I am glad that you found the last stanza humorous. I really enjoyed writing the poem, and I especially enjoyed writing the ending. I hope that your buddy's child enjoys the poem as well.
Joe
posted by
SFJoseph
on July 20, 2008 at 5:59 PM
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wow. you've a knack for this. i like your version better than the old one!
posted by
Luz_Briar
on July 20, 2008 at 4:08 PM
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I laughed out loud at the last stanza
this is good enough that I will print it out to read to my buddy's child.
posted by
lionreign
on July 20, 2008 at 11:38 AM
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Sure sounds like that wolf could use a groom! LOL..Great story Dad!
posted by
Wigopa_
on July 20, 2008 at 12:08 AM
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Re: sam444
Thank you Sam. I am glad that you enjoyed the piggies. I am especially happy that you enjoyed my ending.
Joe
posted by
SFJoseph
on July 19, 2008 at 9:38 PM
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Forevermore Joe this was such a great read. A nice epic with a classic ending! Bravo! sam
posted by
sam444
on July 19, 2008 at 9:03 PM
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An old wise tale freshly reworked. Excellent! Take care, BCA, “Top of the Stairs” 
posted by
BC-A
on July 19, 2008 at 8:50 PM
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very nice!!!
posted by
Star5_
on July 19, 2008 at 8:46 PM
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Re: LMAO ... this is quite the variation.. and I see you saved the best
Thank you so much. I tried to keep the poem in a form true to a children's nursery rhyme, hence the repetitive sequences in the poem. I did have an alternative ending to the poem;
Vowed from this day ever more,
To stay away from piggies door.
I really liked the ending that I chose to post. I just had to have the wolf swear off pork. I hope that you liked my chosen ending as much as I did.
Joe
posted by
SFJoseph
on July 19, 2008 at 8:12 PM
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LMAO ... this is quite the variation.. and I see you saved the best
for last ...
The next day walking in defeat,
The wolf thinking of what to eat,
Felt like one big hairy dork,
And vowed that day to swear off pork. Awesome write!
posted by
VictoriaP
on July 19, 2008 at 7:34 PM
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Re: NiteTide
Thanks Mindy. I am glad that you loved it. I worked hard on these little piggies, and like the wolf, I feel like I need to swear off pork for awhile. I had piggies on the brain all last night. I would love to see your piggy poem. I agree, the two of them would be a piggerific pair.
Joe
posted by
SFJoseph
on July 19, 2008 at 7:29 PM
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Ah.....The Three Little Pigs completely in poetry form!! I loved it!!!! And you don't have to worry about mine, I had planned to write about the rhyme and not the story, so between the two of us we'll have an awesomely, piggerific pair of poems from two different originals!
posted by
NiteTide
on July 19, 2008 at 6:52 PM
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