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hehehe - rocking and rolling
posted by
Smittenheimer
on July 23, 2008 at 5:50 PM
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Re: Lion
Thanks Troosha - I wanted to give everyone a change for my usual content, so sometimes I play games of "what if" and try to imagine scenarios
posted by
lionreign
on July 22, 2008 at 3:16 PM
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Re: What wonderful heartfelt words, my friend...
Thanks Chris - I had a good feeling when I finished this one, I am quite pleased with it
posted by
lionreign
on July 22, 2008 at 3:15 PM
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Lion
Glad I scrolled down the comments to see that this is not what is going on in your life right now. It was sad but very well done!
posted by
Troosha
on July 21, 2008 at 8:14 AM
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What wonderful heartfelt words, my friend...
"The echoes in the dance hall
Still resonate our special song,
The fading tune recalling all"
These words said so much to me. Beautiful... 
- Chris
posted by
Marineair
on July 20, 2008 at 6:27 PM
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Re: lol lion ... love the disclaimer, necessary sometimes. Nicely
thanks vicki, as most of my poetry is blatantly drawn from how I feel at the time I didn't want to worry anyone. I was trying to keep this one simple as I may work with a friend to turn it into a song - glad you liked it
posted by
lionreign
on July 20, 2008 at 11:50 AM
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Re: How Can I Tell You.
wow - thank you
posted by
lionreign
on July 20, 2008 at 11:47 AM
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Re: NiteTide
Thanks Mindy - that's right where I was aiming
posted by
lionreign
on July 20, 2008 at 11:46 AM
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lol lion ... love the disclaimer, necessary sometimes. Nicely
written ... images were right on.
posted by
VictoriaP
on July 20, 2008 at 11:07 AM
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How Can I Tell You.
Very well done. You have the soul of a poet sir.
Joe 
posted by
SFJoseph
on July 20, 2008 at 10:50 AM
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This was incredibly nice. Had an air of love, regret, and the unwilling knowledge of things not meant to be. Very nice.
posted by
NiteTide
on July 20, 2008 at 9:59 AM
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So nobody worries...
This one is an exercise in empathy and poetry - not reflective of anything in my life.
posted by
lionreign
on July 20, 2008 at 9:54 AM
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