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great opening! i'll be back to read the rest, count on it.
posted by
Luz_Briar
on July 22, 2008 at 5:05 PM
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Oooh, this is a new voice.....I'm liking it!! Can't wait for the next one!!!
posted by
NiteTide
on July 21, 2008 at 8:31 PM
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I like how you handle dialogue. Excellent and I agree with BC-A as well! sam
posted by
sam444
on July 21, 2008 at 10:58 AM
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Terrific! You write a sensational narrative. It reads us a message of fending with knowledge of the future. Take care, BCA, “Top of the Stairs” 
posted by
BC-A
on July 21, 2008 at 4:56 AM
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I'll have to look into the products of your goldmine/d.
posted by
AardigeAfrikaner
on July 21, 2008 at 2:47 AM
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