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... and what comes from the heart doesn't often make it into the words we speak... Jen this is an amazing poem. You are such an artist my friend... I am humbled by the easy way your thoughts transform into words... Your writing is so liquid, so natural as if one were listening to someone speak from the heart. Thank you for this beautiful write.
posted by
Sinome
on July 22, 2008 at 4:47 PM
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Too often we say what we do not mean; and we know we do not mean it.
posted by
EX_TURPI
on July 22, 2008 at 2:15 PM
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So superbly written, mermaid
posted by
Kayzzaman
on July 22, 2008 at 10:40 AM
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volatile sincere writing! I loved it!
posted by
Kobriel
on July 22, 2008 at 10:38 AM
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wow, I think we can all say we've been there..done that..and regretted it
but it's surprising what a genuine "I'm sorry" can do..
...
posted by
Rumor
on July 22, 2008 at 6:24 AM
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A traumatic romantic read love. Terrific, lol, BCA, “Top of the Stairs” 
posted by
BC-A
on July 22, 2008 at 6:12 AM
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Which is why we should think before we speak my dear Jen!
Superb piece; thank you and God bless
posted by
mariaki
on July 22, 2008 at 5:57 AM
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So profound and wise expression !
posted by
afzal50
on July 22, 2008 at 5:44 AM
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That last line is infinitely memorable!
Nice anatomy of a lovers' quarrel. :)
posted by
Pat_B
on July 22, 2008 at 5:01 AM
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How very true! nicely written too!
posted by
auslander
on July 21, 2008 at 11:45 PM
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Very sad, Jen
posted by
Afzal_Sunny7
on July 21, 2008 at 5:31 PM
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