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Very nice touch

 

posted by Lotus_Flower on July 24, 2008 at 4:56 AM | link to this | reply

Casper, Marine, BCA, Rumoured..glad u enjoyed the romance :)! - Ash

posted by ash_pradhan on July 23, 2008 at 3:46 PM | link to this | reply

"friends and lovers"..yes, important to be both..I have always thought of
Liz as my best friend, of course, as my wife, and my lover....very romantic, ash.....

posted by Rumor on July 23, 2008 at 7:08 AM | link to this | reply

As soft and gentle as water ...
 Nature takes over their body communication about each other. Terrific! lol, BCA, “Top of the Stairs”

posted by BC-A on July 23, 2008 at 3:00 AM | link to this | reply

Wow, dude...
That ending kind of caught me by surprise, so I had to go back and reread it.  Unexpected, but good.  Nice one!

posted by Marineair on July 22, 2008 at 11:53 PM | link to this | reply

Great friends
with benefits ~Casper

posted by caspertoo on July 22, 2008 at 10:42 PM | link to this | reply

Re: only a great friend can be a lover.......I agree.
you'd know, rain :)! - ash

posted by ash_pradhan on July 22, 2008 at 9:11 PM | link to this | reply

only a great friend can be a lover.......I agree.

posted by Star5_ on July 22, 2008 at 9:09 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Nite..
now what's this?..puzzled?..blushing?..speechless?..all of the above?..hahaha!- Ash

posted by ash_pradhan on July 22, 2008 at 8:36 PM | link to this | reply

Re: loved it - the imagery was most excellent. Encore' por favore' ..
thank u smitten, i bet u could write something like this if u wanted to :)! - ash

posted by ash_pradhan on July 22, 2008 at 8:34 PM | link to this | reply

Re: You painted such a grand scene...What a true romantic you are!
So r u Marion, if only you would let it flow in your writings, my friend :)! - Ash

posted by ash_pradhan on July 22, 2008 at 8:32 PM | link to this | reply

Re: hey there ash,
Hi Mike, u be friends first, then if there is sufficient attraction, proceed with ease to becoming friends & lovers, and keep those feelings throughout your love relationship...unfortunately, even some married people forget at times that they are friends & lovers first, then comes everything else..if people realized that, there'll be less breakups / divorces..take your time young man..your heart is in the right place..best, Ash

posted by ash_pradhan on July 22, 2008 at 8:30 PM | link to this | reply


posted by NiteTide on July 22, 2008 at 7:19 PM | link to this | reply

loved it - the imagery was most excellent.  Encore' por favore'

posted by Smittenheimer on July 22, 2008 at 6:11 PM | link to this | reply

You painted such a grand scene...What a true romantic you are!

posted by Wigopa_ on July 22, 2008 at 5:44 PM | link to this | reply

hey there ash,
well, i was not expecting that but i will say i kinda like the concept of friends and lovers.. i just wish it was really possible sometimes...but great write...i really enjoyed it....mike

posted by meeks2 on July 22, 2008 at 5:03 PM | link to this | reply

What kinda relationship do u want / have :)?! - Ash

posted by ash_pradhan on July 22, 2008 at 11:34 AM | link to this | reply