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This is creative to the max! I am waiting enthralled for more on this work!!!!!
posted by
Wigopa_
on July 23, 2008 at 11:19 PM
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Ravensbane
Chris, this is truly great. A powerful, dark, and engrossing work. It reminds me of some of the writings of my daughter Marion (Wigopa). Please continue on with the planned series. I am dying to read more.
Joe 
posted by
SFJoseph
on July 23, 2008 at 8:13 PM
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Wow
All I can say is wow, usually I loose interest when it is a bit long. But this one held my attention the whole time. Eventhough it was just a quick one, I just wanted to quickly see what is going on around Blogit. Thanks also for commenting on my page. I look forward to reading more from you. Sophie.
posted by
safriyie
on July 23, 2008 at 3:50 PM
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This was beautifully crafted! A masterpiece indeed! Loved it!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on July 23, 2008 at 3:04 PM
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The picture of perfect death
Very well written, I can't wait for more to come.
Good luck with the baby :)
posted by
Lotus_Flower
on July 23, 2008 at 12:43 PM
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Marineair, I like the twist..the hunter becomes the hunted ....
guess you could say he bit off (or tired to) more than he could chew..
..(sorry, it's early in the morning here)
looking forward to more...
...
posted by
Rumor
on July 23, 2008 at 6:52 AM
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Raw and intense my friend!
intriguing and exciting - a riveting tale indeed! Thank you and God bless
posted by
mariaki
on July 23, 2008 at 5:28 AM
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I feel actively clever about it. For Blogit, discussion only limits your original ideas. However another website or college might offer a course or seminar to refine your antagonists. For something beyond Blogit narrow them down. But the story compels the way that it stands. In fact terrific! Take care, BCA, “Top of the Stairs”
posted by
BC-A
on July 23, 2008 at 4:10 AM
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I just love the intensity
this feels like one of the really dark graphic novels, with shades of Poe (as in Edgar Allen, not the Teletubbie), full of dark, engrossing images... incredible. If you stop writing this I will find you and replace your entire wardrobe with Japanese fashion when you're out..
posted by
lionreign
on July 23, 2008 at 2:56 AM
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Too well done, Marineair. I may not come back to this one for more. LOL Granny will go back to your posts about Okinawa.
posted by
TAPS.
on July 23, 2008 at 1:55 AM
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two thumbs up for this one.
posted by
DeeJay101
on July 23, 2008 at 12:42 AM
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Thank you MarineAir
It is quite amazing. Excellent work
posted by
Smittenheimer
on July 22, 2008 at 9:12 PM
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Re: NiteTide
Mindy, thank you for your...um...zealous enthusiasm. I laughed when you commented again. Oh, and you're temporarily forgiven for not reading the completed series...
posted by
Marineair
on July 22, 2008 at 7:03 PM
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I already commented on this...but...........DAMN, I FRIGGIN' LOVE THIS POEM!!!!!!! (P.S. You will have to forgive me for not reading the completed series yet. It's the last week of school and far to crazy for me to concentrate on something that prolific. I will read and comment over this weekend before I disappear for a week.)
posted by
NiteTide
on July 22, 2008 at 7:01 PM
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