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epic and magical
posted by
Smittenheimer
on July 27, 2008 at 9:45 PM
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What a journey this brings me through...just excellent and I like the way you eloquently voiced and arranged this.
~ Elyse (write on!!!)
posted by
elysianfields
on July 27, 2008 at 11:59 AM
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fantasy and feeling alive turned into a shared reality. Awesome flight!
posted by
merkie
on July 24, 2008 at 12:42 PM
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A marvelous piece my dear!
well worth the effort and full of poweful imagery and truths; thank you and God bless
posted by
mariaki
on July 24, 2008 at 5:21 AM
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This poem should be studied by all who wish to know what real poetry is about. Your talent is supernatural
posted by
DeeJay101
on July 24, 2008 at 3:23 AM
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I have chills...
this is that good. I can't praise it highly enough.
And Mindy accused me of being the romantic 
posted by
lionreign
on July 24, 2008 at 2:44 AM
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Exquisite imagery, the cadence- outstanding! sam
posted by
sam444
on July 23, 2008 at 9:59 PM
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A wonderful realization full of yesterdays and tomorrows, love this poem, it speaks from the
heart.
posted by
yellowrose55
on July 23, 2008 at 9:13 PM
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You put a lot into this and it shows... incredible effort marineair...
posted by
VictoriaP
on July 23, 2008 at 8:16 PM
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Re: NiteTide
I'm glad you liked it, Mindy. I wrote it a year out of college, but it's still relevant today. Not just pertaining to love, but our return to innocence if we want. It's always there if we choose to let it be a part of our lives. I'm living proof that it works.
posted by
Marineair
on July 23, 2008 at 6:26 PM
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Wow. That's all that's flitting through my head right now: WOW. For love to have that kind of affect - which brings you back to childhood - which raises you back up again - is astounding...and I am just in: wow.
posted by
NiteTide
on July 23, 2008 at 6:23 PM
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