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Love this Poem, especially the last few lines . . . a rose on a pillow.
posted by
yellowrose55
on July 24, 2008 at 10:16 PM
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Simply great!!
posted by
Lotus_Flower
on July 24, 2008 at 1:23 PM
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Charmingly witty love. lol, BCA, “Top of the Stairs” 
posted by
BC-A
on July 24, 2008 at 3:57 AM
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Great!
I loved the use of unusual metaphor with the flea although the lines that really spoke to me were:
I want to feel your hands
a liquid caress on my skin
posted by
lionreign
on July 24, 2008 at 2:09 AM
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Metaphors galore, this is a delightful poem! sam
posted by
sam444
on July 23, 2008 at 10:14 PM
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Lovely poem...
a liquid carress on my skin is a great line... - Chris
posted by
Marineair
on July 23, 2008 at 7:30 PM
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umm
hot damm, this is umm - Excellent
posted by
Smittenheimer
on July 23, 2008 at 5:53 PM
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ahhh, so sweet.... well, the itching - not so much :)
I really like reading your poetry, have a great evening
posted by
VictoriaP
on July 23, 2008 at 5:37 PM
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