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Your endings are always a 'tour de force' for me. It's like a sweet, soft melody of hypnosis then BAM!, "Here's your frickin' line right here!!!" 
I guess I'm saying that you did a nice job...
posted by
Marineair
on August 16, 2008 at 12:56 AM
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Re: Yellowrose
Thanks, I'm glad you liked it and welcome to my blog
posted by
lionreign
on July 28, 2008 at 7:56 AM
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Re: Elyse
Thanks Elyse, nice to see you and very glad you like this one
posted by
lionreign
on July 28, 2008 at 7:55 AM
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Re: awesome - Thank you
Thanks for visiting Smittenheimer, I am glad you enjoyed this one
posted by
lionreign
on July 28, 2008 at 7:54 AM
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Re: BC-A
Thanks, yeah this one was very natural
posted by
lionreign
on July 28, 2008 at 7:53 AM
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Re: romantic
Thanks Luz_Briar, glad I could entertain you as your work has me
posted by
lionreign
on July 28, 2008 at 7:51 AM
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Re: Merkie
Thank you
posted by
lionreign
on July 28, 2008 at 7:50 AM
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Re: Sam444
Thanks Sam, I am definitely getting it write when a poet of your calibre is so enthused
posted by
lionreign
on July 28, 2008 at 7:49 AM
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Re: Ex_Turpi
cheers
posted by
lionreign
on July 28, 2008 at 7:48 AM
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Re: Love it lion... dance!
Thank you Vickip, that means a lot
posted by
lionreign
on July 28, 2008 at 7:48 AM
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Re: Beautiful ....
thanks
posted by
lionreign
on July 28, 2008 at 7:47 AM
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Re: Yes, it dances down the images
Thanks!
posted by
lionreign
on July 28, 2008 at 7:46 AM
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Re: Such powerful and beautiful sentiments my friend!
Thank you, dear Mariaki, I am glad you liked this one
posted by
lionreign
on July 28, 2008 at 7:46 AM
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Re: NiteTide
Thanks sweetie!
posted by
lionreign
on July 28, 2008 at 7:45 AM
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Re: The candle dancing in your breeze.
Thank you Harderup
posted by
lionreign
on July 28, 2008 at 6:02 AM
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Your poem has flowing rhythm and I love the dancing candle.
posted by
yellowrose55
on July 26, 2008 at 9:02 PM
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This is cool ~ I like the sense of the flame dancing --- this is very lovely ~ Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on July 26, 2008 at 5:58 PM
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awesome - Thank you
this was... entrancing and you popped it like a cork. Bravo
posted by
Smittenheimer
on July 26, 2008 at 6:39 AM
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I feel the vibes. Your poem moves to the rhythm of your heart1 Take 
! BCA, "Top of the Stairs"
posted by
BC-A
on July 26, 2008 at 2:59 AM
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romantic
excellent and lyrical
posted by
Luz_Briar
on July 25, 2008 at 11:47 PM
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Stirring music!
posted by
merkie
on July 25, 2008 at 11:56 AM
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This is wonderful! I love the vastness of the imagery and how it fills my head! But this is especially meaningful for me:
I dance,
Leaping and swaying,
To a beat only I understand.
What a fantastic way to open a poem! I am glad you liked my poem enough to make a copy and post, it warmed my heart! Thank you! sam
posted by
sam444
on July 25, 2008 at 10:15 AM
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Its always good to dance.
posted by
EX_TURPI
on July 25, 2008 at 7:26 AM
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Love it lion... dance!
posted by
VictoriaP
on July 25, 2008 at 5:58 AM
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Beautiful ....
posted by
afzal50
on July 25, 2008 at 5:42 AM
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Yes, it dances down the images
posted by
Kayzzaman
on July 25, 2008 at 4:37 AM
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Such powerful and beautiful sentiments my friend!
superbly done; thank you and God bless
posted by
mariaki
on July 25, 2008 at 4:14 AM
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Awww, this was exceptional!! Although, on a general basis, your prolific manner is enchanting to me, today it is the simplicity of the words you have used to create the complexity of the dance. You are one fabulous writer!
posted by
NiteTide
on July 25, 2008 at 3:10 AM
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The candle dancing in your breeze.
very well put
posted by
Lotus_Flower
on July 25, 2008 at 1:38 AM
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