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This is an excellent rendition of transformation! sam
posted by
sam444
on July 28, 2008 at 1:18 PM
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This is very inspirational so glad I found this entry. Kind regards
posted by
Smittenheimer
on July 27, 2008 at 8:06 PM
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Transformation
Thanks to all of you who viewed/commented on the poem. I was trying to express the transformation both in words, and in the structure of the poem. I wanted the reader to feel the transformation, the loss of self, and the exhaustion/breathlessness of the subject of the poem. I hope that I have succeeded. Thank you.
Joe 
posted by
SFJoseph
on July 27, 2008 at 6:35 PM
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At first read I thought this was about something else entirely!! I see now
you were having a nightmare. I really enjoyed this and the cooling off and waking at the end. Lovely!
posted by
VictoriaP
on July 27, 2008 at 12:44 PM
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I forgot to breathe...
That was really quite a story - well done
posted by
Lotus_Flower
on July 26, 2008 at 11:51 PM
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So...I have to wonder... Have you been reading my werewolf novels again...If so I am just going to have to hide them all from you! LOL..Nicely done!
posted by
Wigopa_
on July 26, 2008 at 11:14 PM
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Joe!!! This was so damn cool! I got my cadence from the thrust of the words. The varied stress was incredulous! I don't know how to fully explain it but it was like a race and yet it was a joy ride. I know there is a ton in this poem that was created naturally. I will be back tomorrow and have a look. I am so addicted to your poetry, I had to come read even though quite late for me! Two reads are always a blast anyway. Now I slip away and wish you a fine evening and wonderful day tomorrow! sam
posted by
sam444
on July 26, 2008 at 10:16 PM
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WOW ~ I actually was breathless from the transformation...this is quite the creative write Joe ~ From beginning to end it is a thrill to read.
Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on July 26, 2008 at 10:00 PM
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