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NiteTide
You're the Best!!! i'm posting it right now
posted by
Luz_Briar
on July 31, 2008 at 1:06 PM
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The first story was heartbreaking to read, but this one....this one is just making me cry to no end. I feel so sorry for Sarah with her hopeless love, and I feel such sorrow for Brul who cannot love a woman back (although I was hoping he would fall in love with Sarah) - and for poor Dustin who just fell in love without a choice and ended up dead through Sarah's jealousy.....oh my god, this just tears me to pieces. I am incredibly frightened about reading the end, yet I want to read it so badly, that I am impatiently sitting here hoping you will post very soon....
(lol, I told you I would read all of it!!!!)
posted by
NiteTide
on July 31, 2008 at 12:20 PM
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Re: I am still gripped....
thanks so much, lionreign!
posted by
Luz_Briar
on July 31, 2008 at 12:09 PM
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I am still gripped....
This is fabulous...
posted by
lionreign
on July 31, 2008 at 7:49 AM
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Rumored and Harderup
thanks so much for sticking around! i'm pretty confident you'll like the ending
posted by
Luz_Briar
on July 30, 2008 at 9:00 PM
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very interesting background..hmmmm....can't wait to see how it all wraps up
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posted by
Rumor
on July 30, 2008 at 4:55 PM
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I really enjoy reading this story ;)
posted by
Lotus_Flower
on July 30, 2008 at 3:07 PM
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