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Above the rim! What creativity, great flow, awsome style, and content whoa!
posted by
Mystereo
on January 5, 2009 at 6:58 PM
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Great words, shimmering waves to Northern Lights. Image of inspration,claims my pen again.
posted by
merkie
on August 3, 2008 at 8:34 AM
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I love this one. You really do a good job painting the picture.
posted by
sfcookingpoet
on August 1, 2008 at 5:37 PM
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Perfect cadence and excellent use of alliteration! sam
posted by
sam444
on July 31, 2008 at 2:46 PM
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ooooo!
i especially like this one!!!
posted by
Luz_Briar
on July 31, 2008 at 2:44 PM
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your soul shines brightly
the heavens listen
Blessing you in return
Amen
posted by
Smittenheimer
on July 31, 2008 at 9:25 AM
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flowing words
Excellent writing
posted by
Kobriel
on July 31, 2008 at 7:01 AM
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Wow Joseph... you never cease to amaze me... This poem is amazing... absolutely loved it...Succinct and drenched in meaning. Fabulous!
posted by
Sinome
on July 30, 2008 at 9:50 PM
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Some good images here
posted by
Kayzzaman
on July 30, 2008 at 9:44 PM
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Re: NiteTide
Thank you so much Mindy. I do like to play with the words, their sound and feel. I am glad that you enjoyed it.
Joe 
posted by
SFJoseph
on July 30, 2008 at 8:31 PM
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GORGEOUS!! Your play with words always ALWAYS astound me! Fantastic imagery!
posted by
NiteTide
on July 30, 2008 at 8:10 PM
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