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You are talking reality, friend, which goes beyond the mushiness of love
poetry
posted by
Straightforward
on August 2, 2008 at 6:57 PM
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I am so pleased to catch up with your work! I must read a second time, the info at the bottom took me to a different perspective. I wanted to keep my initial imagery first! sam
posted by
sam444
on August 2, 2008 at 3:52 PM
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I thought that the previous information that your poem gives suggests that the young lady leaves a shady past behind her. However she ends up with a happy ending, love.. With TLC, BCA, “Top of the Stairs”
posted by
BC-A
on August 1, 2008 at 9:51 PM
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charming
i can tell we are in store for a great second installement. these people are very harsh on this girl. sadly, this is realistic
posted by
Luz_Briar
on August 1, 2008 at 9:08 PM
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Nice...
I'll be looking forward to more.
posted by
Afzal_Sunny7
on August 1, 2008 at 8:43 PM
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cant wait to read more. great work.
posted by
Trene
on August 1, 2008 at 1:49 PM
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wating for part two good work
posted by
spinner
on August 1, 2008 at 12:33 PM
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