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as for spelling and grammatical errors, i see none to correct!
posted by
Luz_Briar
on August 2, 2008 at 3:35 PM
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When you stretch yourself ...
... hard enough, from darkness to light, you will gain - and whatever the gain is, it will do you good ... -
- genio
posted by
ggXpress
on August 2, 2008 at 1:46 PM
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Sometimes it's tough
but the more you find, the more you will see.
posted by
Bel_
on August 2, 2008 at 10:14 AM
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the light will become brighter because we believe in you and care for you
with real love.
posted by
Kabu
on August 2, 2008 at 5:37 AM
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Very well expressed
posted by
Kayzzaman
on August 2, 2008 at 4:58 AM
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So well expressed !
posted by
afzal50
on August 2, 2008 at 1:48 AM
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Harderup
This is nice. I saw on another post your father was in the hospital. I shall be happy to pray for you and for him if you do not object. I wish peace for you.
posted by
Justi
on August 2, 2008 at 1:20 AM
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beautiful words
posted by
Trene
on August 2, 2008 at 12:05 AM
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Your poem is not only beautiful, but also the positive idea about others and you as well
liken
posted by
lyknliken
on August 1, 2008 at 11:59 PM
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It is starting to become evident for me too :))
posted by
mysteria
on August 1, 2008 at 11:48 PM
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And try is all that can be done to make things right......excellent piece!
posted by
NiteTide
on August 1, 2008 at 11:06 PM
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uplifting and full of hope possible
posted by
Samantha39
on August 1, 2008 at 10:48 PM
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