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Re: Think I'll avoid that marsh....
awww marshes are beautiful! when gators aren't chomping on you, of course.
thanks for reading, Troosha!
posted by
Luz_Briar
on August 4, 2008 at 2:03 PM
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Think I'll avoid that marsh....
Loved your 3 closing lines, by the way.
posted by
Troosha
on August 4, 2008 at 8:56 AM
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Thanks, Wiley! :)
posted by
Luz_Briar
on August 3, 2008 at 9:16 PM
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Luz_Briar
Loved the picture for this sinister place, well written kiddo
posted by
WileyJohn
on August 3, 2008 at 9:14 PM
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Rumored
maybe a little of both. remember it's as afraid of you as you are of it
posted by
Luz_Briar
on August 3, 2008 at 2:04 PM
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sounds like a "creepy crawlie" got cold feet when it encountered
"human" beings..
..or is it the oter way around????..
..
posted by
Rumor
on August 3, 2008 at 1:31 PM
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