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posted by
Star5_
on August 5, 2008 at 9:12 PM
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This surely tugs at the heart strings my friend!
very tender warm and touching with a touch of melancholy; I simply adore the accompanying picture (I actually have a giant framed one in my living room); thank you and God bless
posted by
mariaki
on August 5, 2008 at 3:40 AM
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I absolutely hate that feeling of wanting what I don't have.....it drives me crazy! Wonderful poem though!
posted by
NiteTide
on August 5, 2008 at 1:48 AM
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The greatest proof of true love manifests itself in self-sacrifice. ―Take care, lol, lofl, With TLC, BCA, “Top of the Stairs”, BCA, “Top of the Stairs"
posted by
BC-A
on August 4, 2008 at 10:25 PM
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Harderup, why is it that we long so for what we probably can never have?
posted by
TAPS.
on August 4, 2008 at 10:01 PM
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Hard, this is really touching...
but please make sure u both have communicated & given your best, if you really want each other that badly, before you let go..i do not know ur situations, but sometimes people tend to take the easy way out..of course you two r the best judge of that, and i by no means am preaching..just expressing my views to a wonderful fellow poet & soul..best wishes, Ash
posted by
ash_pradhan
on August 4, 2008 at 4:40 PM
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posted by
lovelyladymonk
on August 4, 2008 at 3:45 PM
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unrequited love...:(
nice work, harderup
posted by
Luz_Briar
on August 4, 2008 at 3:31 PM
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Harderup, I think we all face this type of situation, if not in real life,
in a sad dream we can never forget.
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posted by
Rumor
on August 4, 2008 at 3:21 PM
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enjoyed, dear
posted by
Samantha39
on August 4, 2008 at 2:05 PM
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I loved this. ~Peace, OTA
posted by
Blue_feathers
on August 4, 2008 at 1:24 PM
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Harderup
Sometimes we want that which we can't have with such intensity and passion. Why is that? Beautiful piece....
posted by
Troosha
on August 4, 2008 at 11:49 AM
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Let go...
What's meant to be will be, whether or not we think it or believe it.
Beautifully well done!
posted by
Afzal_Sunny7
on August 4, 2008 at 11:42 AM
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captivating one this I most certainly did feel - Thank you
posted by
Smittenheimer
on August 4, 2008 at 11:33 AM
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ohhh
Don't worry
I'll let you go
That is definitely another masterpiece. Very sweet of you. I like the last part. Don't worry.. I'll let you go. It must be difficult but as it has been said over and over again. when you love someone you will let them go. Amazing. I am going to go back and read it again. that is a lovely love poem. Sophie.
posted by
safriyie
on August 4, 2008 at 11:31 AM
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Amen! Our own egress is the most difficult part! It has to be done though! Grand poem! sam
posted by
sam444
on August 4, 2008 at 10:41 AM
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*sigh*
posted by
Bel_
on August 4, 2008 at 10:23 AM
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Wow...
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on August 4, 2008 at 10:14 AM
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