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posted by
Smittenheimer
on August 6, 2008 at 10:26 PM
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Just Beautiful
This was so emotional and so beautifully written. What a glorious depiction of nature and its ability to move us.
posted by
sfcookingpoet
on August 6, 2008 at 8:22 AM
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Enlightenment
This was very beautiful and touching. A very emotional expression of a love of nature. It makes me want to go out, sit quietly in the garden, and just listen.
Joe 
posted by
SFJoseph
on August 5, 2008 at 9:33 PM
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Wow Marta you have moved me again. You are tops!
posted by
merkie
on August 5, 2008 at 8:08 PM
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reminds me of the CA R
edwoods
posted by
Lanetay
on August 5, 2008 at 6:23 PM
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Wonderful world
I was just sitting in the dark outside. The rain has stopped and the silence was so nice. Hearing only the raindrops still falling from the trees. I was thinking how peaceful it was. There is nothing as powerful as nature.
Thanks for a lovely poem 
posted by
Lotus_Flower
on August 5, 2008 at 1:08 PM
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another master poem.
posted by
Kabu
on August 5, 2008 at 12:49 PM
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You are so masterful at imagery! I was doing it all mentally as I read the words. I love this poem, it is mind clearing! And left with eternal, it doesn't get any sweeter than that! So enlightening as the title suggests! Love to my dear sinome (Marta) Shelly
Are you feeling better?
posted by
sam444
on August 5, 2008 at 10:28 AM
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Oh I so love that feeling!
posted by
Bel_
on August 5, 2008 at 8:57 AM
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Sinome
Yet another masterpiece - how do you do it!?!? Your pour your heart into each piece....
posted by
Troosha
on August 5, 2008 at 8:23 AM
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This is such a beauty Sinome!
Perfect in every way; I simply love it; thank you my friend for sharing this excellence and God bless
posted by
mariaki
on August 5, 2008 at 4:21 AM
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posted by
contagion_publishing
on August 5, 2008 at 3:21 AM
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WOW......the forest being such a place of purity and release is a new concept for me....I generally think of forests as a place of darkness and escape, but through your poem I can see it as such a beautiful place with such wondrous power of eternity. I felt, as I feel with a lot of your poems, like following the poems words and I wanted to lie on the forest floor with my eyes closed, just so I could listen to
life.
posted by
NiteTide
on August 5, 2008 at 1:12 AM
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Absolutely remarkable, this one
" ... comes the secret that is heard only in silence
and suddenly you Know,
you feel love as you've never felt it before
because is not love of self but love of life,
with all its immediacy and transformative power
and you feel the forest inside you
and above you
and below you
because you are the forest and it is you".
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
on August 4, 2008 at 9:31 PM
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Hi Marta,my ocean-kissed princess
This poem describes a moment you just experienced. I loved it soooo much that when it commes to an universal connectedness, I couldn't have said any the better. That is why we don't say multiverse, we call it Universe, and the universe is a university, which you have so beautifully expressed in this poem. That is why I love poets.
xoxo.
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
on August 4, 2008 at 9:26 PM
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Selfless and eternal ....
posted by
afzal50
on August 4, 2008 at 9:22 PM
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Wow, Sinome....great work!
So beautiful and so true...we are all connected with everything!
posted by
Afzal_Sunny7
on August 4, 2008 at 9:16 PM
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