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What a wonderful descriptive piece. We all choose which parts of our hearts and mind we wish to display and share. Great write
posted by
lionreign
on August 6, 2008 at 3:44 AM
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merkie
You have been here nearly a month and I had not read you until now. I've just been busy this month and busy wears me out like it did not when I was young. I've just been catching up on your blog and I really like your work.
Hopefully I will be visiting you often now.
posted by
TAPS.
on August 5, 2008 at 10:13 PM
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Came back for another read and had to say Hi :-) This is one great poem Merkie
posted by
Sinome
on August 5, 2008 at 10:04 PM
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A huge thank you to all you special friends!
posted by
merkie
on August 5, 2008 at 8:06 PM
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Thoughts of a serious writer! Take care, lol, lofl, With TLC, BCA, “Top of the Stairs” ,
posted by
BC-A
on August 5, 2008 at 7:05 PM
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Very nice portrayal...
...of the inner recesses of the mind.
And a very nice play on words, too.
posted by
metalrat
on August 5, 2008 at 4:14 PM
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I love this line: Because I am made of clay. And why not! We can be shaped at will. Bravo! sam
posted by
sam444
on August 5, 2008 at 3:00 PM
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Beautiful poem Merkie... I love your style... its easy going and very descriptive. Remember that some of the greatest works of art started as plain clay... I have a feeling your heart is just as great as them, clay or not :-)
posted by
Sinome
on August 5, 2008 at 10:29 AM
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