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Reading this and your other poems and stories,
I can understand why you are enjoying my story and the characters so much!
Writing is so good for working out the shadows and haunts within, and growing up with addicts--whether to substances, or power or abusiveness... Keep it flowing, Luz!
posted by
Ciel
on August 8, 2008 at 7:11 PM
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Rumored
hehe. but the weird and unexpected can be so much fun too!
posted by
Luz_Briar
on August 6, 2008 at 7:19 AM
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"the grass is not always greener on the other side" - how true, especially
in the world of the weird and unexpected.
...things are never what they appear to be...
posted by
Rumor
on August 6, 2008 at 7:16 AM
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Lustorlove
actually, i encourage you to examine strange things.
you never know what you may find
posted by
Luz_Briar
on August 6, 2008 at 7:05 AM
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onRain
thank you. 'beautiful' is quite a compliment
posted by
Luz_Briar
on August 6, 2008 at 7:02 AM
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some strong words of advice
posted by
Lanetay
on August 6, 2008 at 7:00 AM
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wow, how beautiful like a song as my heart beat!
posted by
Star5_
on August 5, 2008 at 8:55 PM
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SFJoseph
thank you! i've always been saturnine. sorry if it gets to be too much at times
. thank you for always giving me a chance, though!
posted by
Luz_Briar
on August 5, 2008 at 8:47 PM
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Wiley
haha. thank you! i am quite odd, aren't I?
posted by
Luz_Briar
on August 5, 2008 at 8:45 PM
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Best Keep Away
This was really quite a great poem! The mood was very dark, but I know that's your style. A lot of very good and powerful lines. Very well done!
Joe
posted by
SFJoseph
on August 5, 2008 at 8:30 PM
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Luz Briar
Anybody that writes lovely poetry is allowed to be odd luv. Well done
posted by
WileyJohn
on August 5, 2008 at 8:28 PM
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Sam and Patman
Thank you for reading!
It's only about how people fear what they don't at first understand.
posted by
Luz_Briar
on August 5, 2008 at 7:28 PM
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My favorite line was
What a nice sad thing to have passion, ne’er shown,
posted by
Sudanym_
on August 5, 2008 at 4:14 PM
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You're scaring me.
posted by
Sudanym_
on August 5, 2008 at 4:12 PM
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This is so poignantly powerful. I was so taken with this line:
Didn’t they teach you to cringe. Magnificent! sam
posted by
sam444
on August 5, 2008 at 3:56 PM
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Re: Profound, deep...wow!
haha thanks, Teddy. wasn't expecting a 'profound' for this one
posted by
Luz_Briar
on August 5, 2008 at 2:43 PM
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Profound, deep...wow!
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on August 5, 2008 at 2:42 PM
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