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You recount happenings of every day. A very thoughtfully crafted work. Yet I hope it is because of carelessness and NOT because of unconcern for the other. Indeed, this world will be a terrible place if it were so.
posted by
EX_TURPI
on August 6, 2008 at 11:42 AM
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What a whimsical poem! I live in an area where there's a lot of seniors and they seem to just meander through the crosswalks without a care in the world (oblivious to any stop or go indicators). It's maddening if you're trying to get from point A to point B.
posted by
Troosha
on August 6, 2008 at 9:46 AM
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I must say I enjoyed this tremendously! It is such a different take! I may never be the sam in a crosswalk again! Too damn funny! Congratulations and welcome to Blogit! You are on my favorite page now! Thanks for visiting my blog! sam
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sam444
on August 6, 2008 at 8:40 AM
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Narcissist's Warning
Hi Deborah. Another great poem. When I read your poems, I always find myself starting to laugh when I'm half way through. You have a great sense of humor. I really enjoy reading your poetry. A good laugh is a good thing, especially at the end of a long day.
Joe 
posted by
SFJoseph
on August 5, 2008 at 8:39 PM
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Subjectively I find these kinds of lyrics too tough. Objectively you write well with great emotion love. I look forward to reading other poems by you. With TLC, BCA, “Top of the Stairs” , BCAA, “Top
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BC-A
on August 5, 2008 at 7:22 PM
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