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Radiant skin that somehow seems
To be woven from the pale moon light.
These are genius lines, lion. How come we never see anything like this in your garottes? ;)
posted by
Marineair
on August 16, 2008 at 12:58 AM
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Re: NiteTide
LOL I'd suggest something involving beer and food...
I'm back now 
posted by
lionreign
on August 14, 2008 at 7:27 AM
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Re: Lion
Thanks Chris - good to see you back, even if it was just while I was away
posted by
lionreign
on August 14, 2008 at 7:26 AM
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Re: Sam444
thank you - I tend towards a simple format for those poems where I am trying hardest to capture an image. Glad you liked it
posted by
lionreign
on August 14, 2008 at 7:24 AM
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Re: that's a pretty lady
Thanks Luz - I agree, she is a very pretty lady
posted by
lionreign
on August 14, 2008 at 7:23 AM
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Re: Lovely
Thanks Malcolm and welcome
posted by
lionreign
on August 14, 2008 at 7:23 AM
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Re: They just get lovelier every day my friend!
thanks mariaki
posted by
lionreign
on August 14, 2008 at 7:22 AM
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Re: Harderup
I thought I was the lucky one...
posted by
lionreign
on August 14, 2008 at 7:22 AM
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Re: BC-A
Thanks - I am glad it appealed
posted by
lionreign
on August 14, 2008 at 7:14 AM
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Re: Beautiful so beautiful !
Thank you
posted by
lionreign
on August 14, 2008 at 7:05 AM
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Oh you silly romantic, you. What are we to do with you?? hmmm?? LOL. Hurry back!!!!!
posted by
NiteTide
on August 10, 2008 at 1:27 AM
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Lion
That was fantastic. So well done.
- Chris
posted by
Marineair
on August 7, 2008 at 3:24 AM
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What a lovely portrait you have painted in words! I love the AB rhyme scheme. Of course I had my favorite line:
I feel my heart awaken and grow; what a glorious line and feeling! Kudos!!! sam
posted by
sam444
on August 6, 2008 at 8:04 AM
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that's a pretty lady
a Very pretty lady, with sunlight in her eyes. a very loving poem.
posted by
Luz_Briar
on August 6, 2008 at 7:31 AM
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Lovely
I particulaalry liked the last two lines
posted by
malcolm
on August 6, 2008 at 6:03 AM
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They just get lovelier every day my friend!
a true work of beauty; thank you and God bless
posted by
mariaki
on August 6, 2008 at 5:23 AM
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Aww - what a lucky girl.
posted by
Lotus_Flower
on August 6, 2008 at 5:22 AM
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You speak your language that describes your love with the right touch. With TLC, BCA, “Top of the Stairs” , 
BCAA, “Top of the Stairs
posted by
BC-A
on August 6, 2008 at 4:55 AM
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Beautiful so beautiful !
posted by
afzal50
on August 6, 2008 at 4:44 AM
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