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I really enjoyed this poem.
posted by
gapcohen
on August 6, 2008 at 8:28 PM
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I remember.
Wonderful remembrances, beautifully expressed. A lovely poem.
Joe 
posted by
SFJoseph
on August 6, 2008 at 7:53 PM
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Your reflections and ...
... sensing of what this life is all about have a good start in this poem -
- genio
posted by
ggXpress
on August 6, 2008 at 10:20 AM
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Harderup
What a wonderful poem - a slow, methodical progression through life. This first verse struck a chord with me as those were thoughts I had as a child...
Extremely well done!
posted by
Troosha
on August 6, 2008 at 9:43 AM
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posted by
merkie
on August 6, 2008 at 8:59 AM
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posted by
lovelyladymonk
on August 6, 2008 at 8:51 AM
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I remember
This was just wonderful. It was very pleasing and moving, and brought up memories for me, and I expect for all your readers.
posted by
sfcookingpoet
on August 6, 2008 at 8:18 AM
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I think this is a very strong line:
I remember the freedom of being free We must never forget and always strive to be fee! sam
posted by
sam444
on August 6, 2008 at 8:11 AM
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Nice work. Reads like song lyrics. I hope you'll find a musician
and see what they can do with this one. Seems to me it's got universal appeal. :)pat
posted by
Pat_B
on August 6, 2008 at 8:11 AM
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indeed :)
I remember the shame of being ashamed
me too, my friend. me too.
posted by
Luz_Briar
on August 6, 2008 at 7:29 AM
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"the maturing of being mature"...remembering life as being beautiful
no matter what.- there is maturity in that statement a lot of people never reach.
....
posted by
Rumor
on August 6, 2008 at 7:23 AM
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Great phrase:
'the shame of being shamed'
thanks for sharing
posted by
malcolm
on August 6, 2008 at 6:05 AM
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Superb summary of life and growing up my friend!
very well done; thank you and God bless
posted by
mariaki
on August 6, 2008 at 5:28 AM
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Life is beautiful indeed .
posted by
afzal50
on August 6, 2008 at 5:00 AM
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