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Marineair, I am thoroughly enjoying this and looking forward to what you
have coming for us..


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posted by
Rumor
on August 8, 2008 at 5:22 PM
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Hi again, I wrote the 'writer' but ...
... ment of course: the 'reader' - sorry - yes, the poem is good action -

- genio
posted by
ggXpress
on August 8, 2008 at 2:29 PM
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Very narrative ...
... you manage to draw the writer into the action - good writing -
posted by
ggXpress
on August 8, 2008 at 2:26 PM
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Wow! this was a great read, can't wait for what you say its coming! Congratulations on the new Baby!!! How did you manage to write all that with a new born in the house? You are amazing! TAke care of yourself and your new treassure.
posted by
Sinome
on August 7, 2008 at 8:36 PM
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Intense
I was holding my breathe
posted by
Lotus_Flower
on August 6, 2008 at 10:38 PM
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