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Great write you will have to stop cause losing it can hurt.
posted by
Mystereo
on December 19, 2008 at 9:38 PM
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mm liking that you sit now loveand dance make love (gapcohen's
Nike slogan) placed
here
posted by
Smittenheimer
on August 11, 2008 at 12:20 AM
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Joe
It's always a pleasure to read your work. Well written, and thanks for sharing! - Chris
posted by
Marineair
on August 10, 2008 at 2:02 AM
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...just breathe.....and believe it will be all right. This was a lovely poem, Joe. The rhymes and rhythm were just enchanting, and I had to read it over again, because I enjoyed it so much!
posted by
NiteTide
on August 10, 2008 at 1:12 AM
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I love it!
Your words personify so many working stiffs in this country-
posted by
mejustme
on August 9, 2008 at 10:11 PM
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Good write . Sounds like the quiet desk will unwind the stress!Slowly losing it!
posted by
merkie
on August 9, 2008 at 12:52 PM
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Love it!!!
Oh, Joe. Can't I relate! This was so funny, so perfect. Thanks for giving me a laugh about our "condition."
posted by
sfcookingpoet
on August 9, 2008 at 11:22 AM
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Joe, this is fantastic! It is the plight of the worker. The alliteration was fabulous and the cadence and rhyme superb! sam
posted by
sam444
on August 9, 2008 at 9:24 AM
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SF
Cheer up - it's Saturday - maybe you can put all the sh--t behind you for a day or two....
posted by
Troosha
on August 9, 2008 at 9:16 AM
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I am sorry you are feeling so down, I hope you feel better soon. This poem is excellent though, with your usual flair you have depicted what most of us have felt at one time or another. You are such a master at portraying feelings. Some poets are good at imagery, some are more versed ( no pon intended :-)) in describing emotions... and then there are some like you that combine both abilities to blow us all away. Bravo my friend. Great poem.
posted by
Sinome
on August 9, 2008 at 7:14 AM
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