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Beautiful...
Sad but true.
In time, all will pass... - Chris
posted by
Marineair
on August 10, 2008 at 6:48 AM
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Marta my princess, my heart does go out to you. Did you know that I have now stopped saying stop, no more . . . why? Because after the three NDE's I've had, it has taught me ... taught me a lot. I have lost fear. DPS'
to OKS. Cheer up lady
. The poem was indeed a beauty, just as is your wont.
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
on August 9, 2008 at 9:39 PM
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No punishment....
Love and all the pains that come with is never punishment.
Some things just aren't meant to be.
As time moves on, we are better at seeing how past things were not right for us, and everything works as it should...for our better happiness.
posted by
Afzal_Sunny7
on August 9, 2008 at 8:55 PM
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No More Please...
As you can tell from some of my poems, I have also been in that place that you so beautifully/sadly describe. Remember, this too will pass. Your poem was beautifully expressed and written.
Joe 
posted by
SFJoseph
on August 9, 2008 at 7:44 PM
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Been there.
Been there. Done that. So beautifully expressed. Thank you Sinome! I expect we have all experienced this at some point in our lives, and you expressed it so well. Thank you!
posted by
sfcookingpoet
on August 9, 2008 at 7:18 PM
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p.s (sinome you are straight dope)
posted by
lestate7
on August 9, 2008 at 7:15 PM
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PoeTry
posted by
lestate7
on August 9, 2008 at 7:02 PM
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maybe in another life...
guilt, pain, perplexity
reduces us to saying please.
posted by
Luz_Briar
on August 9, 2008 at 6:26 PM
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Sad - this kind of loss is always so sad.
posted by
gapcohen
on August 9, 2008 at 6:13 PM
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Everytime I read you I hear the cripness of your pen
Not the sound of Angels, who'd want to hear from them?
Rather the stensiled pen that carves me out of cardboard
the sound sharp and knowing with a cut of tailor's razor
I can almost hear the sectet thought as you post me on your
refrigerator
posted by
jfm32
on August 9, 2008 at 6:10 PM
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I really understand this one
posted by
Lanetay
on August 9, 2008 at 5:01 PM
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Sinome, that was so me yesterday! I had a migraine that was out of this world and I wanted to be out of this world and I echo your thoughts! sam
posted by
sam444
on August 9, 2008 at 12:32 PM
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one turns a few bow low find a
K iss 
posted by
Smittenheimer
on August 9, 2008 at 12:23 PM
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thank you for your nice comments
posted by
muley12
on August 9, 2008 at 12:14 PM
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Your pains are well expressed here
posted by
Kayzzaman
on August 9, 2008 at 11:15 AM
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Very well written - I can feel your pain
posted by
Lotus_Flower
on August 9, 2008 at 9:40 AM
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Sinome
I waffled between whether or not these were sentiments you had/have in your dreams or if they are a window into your actual life. If it’s the latter, I’m sorry that your heart has been broken (be it now or some time in the past). There was undeniable emotion in this piece.
posted by
Troosha
on August 9, 2008 at 9:23 AM
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sometimes.......but you can change it around.,
posted by
Star5_
on August 9, 2008 at 8:55 AM
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