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Your creativity went far and beyound then you settled and sweetly charmed!
Great wrtie you really can write easy to follow and get your points across.
posted by
Mystereo
on March 1, 2009 at 5:26 PM
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...continuing my read. Love these off-beat, reversed perceptions. (Been a while since I was a peach...thanx for reminding me). What I especially liked was these very motions everyone does at the fruit stand (as if being there watching the buyer). The reversed perception makes the commonplace a dramatic action built thru waiting/suspense, while peach is having a universal experience we all can relate to. Wonderful setup, timing, release and double enterdre. The last line I feel off my chair!
posted by
jfm32
on November 18, 2008 at 2:01 PM
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Very good imagery and flow. Vivid descriptions.
posted by
merkie
on October 4, 2008 at 10:05 AM
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hmmnnn...some 'kodak moment' in my thoughts....lovely dear...
posted by
__Purple_Mermaid11__
on August 12, 2008 at 12:10 AM
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posted by
Star5_
on August 10, 2008 at 5:40 AM
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