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I would never want this to happen, although I have been myself there at times:
the heart might also lose its reason to live. Such a poignant line! My son is due in late tonight. I can't wait! Love you, sam. xoxoox
posted by
sam444
on August 13, 2008 at 10:27 AM
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RAINDROPS AND TEARDROPS INTERMINGLE, sAD SONG.
posted by
merkie
on August 12, 2008 at 5:52 PM
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I feel the rain, the emotion, and picture the roses! With TLC, BCA, "Top of the Stairs"
posted by
BC-A
on August 12, 2008 at 12:50 PM
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OK, it was Troosha that said it and now i'll shut up.
posted by
Sudanym_
on August 12, 2008 at 8:58 AM
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It REALLY sucks being alone but being in a bad relationship is worse. It's like pee or poo, take your choice.
posted by
Sudanym_
on August 12, 2008 at 8:53 AM
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what she said about being in a crowd.
posted by
Sudanym_
on August 12, 2008 at 8:47 AM
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Very nice
So good it's depressing. And wait mermaid said, yea i hat3e that, maybe that's why i don't go out a lot.
posted by
Sudanym_
on August 12, 2008 at 8:47 AM
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"maybe in another life I did something very wrong"
"I am tired and I just want to scream". Yea, crying is good to, but punching people and stuff is bad. The end of that poem is killer. No more...please ... stop. When i feel like that i fe3el suicidal, i'm trying to relax.
posted by
Sudanym_
on August 12, 2008 at 8:42 AM
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posted by
Smittenheimer
on August 12, 2008 at 12:03 AM
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I love the rain but it does have a way to make you feel sad
posted by
Lanetay
on August 11, 2008 at 8:05 PM
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posted by
mejustme
on August 11, 2008 at 5:28 PM
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posted by
_Dido_
on August 11, 2008 at 4:50 PM
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oh my......I've been reading a lot of poems that have been breaking my heart, and this one is no exception. Your words are filled with such sorrow that I feel like my heart is being squeezed with every line. I even began to read this like a heart beat and it began to slow down in the end....
posted by
NiteTide
on August 11, 2008 at 4:49 PM
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you know you really really fly? one of the best! 
posted by
lestate7
on August 11, 2008 at 2:57 PM
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even though he lies right beside you....
how sad, Sinome.
posted by
Luz_Briar
on August 11, 2008 at 12:37 PM
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"trying to find the someone I miss", I understand. 'Continued' in my blog.
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
on August 11, 2008 at 10:13 AM
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Striking imagery and I love the metaphor at the end! One never knows what can happen at season's end! You are so fabulous when it comes to imagery! Love you, sam
posted by
sam444
on August 11, 2008 at 8:44 AM
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Sinome
There is nothing more sad or lonely than feeling a sense of loss when in fact the person you feel you have lost is right there beside you. A close second is standing in a crowded room feeling all alone – that’s when you know a shift needs to take place and will take place. And rain, tapping on our window, has a way of bringing out these feelings as you’ve so beautifully described in this piece….
posted by
Troosha
on August 11, 2008 at 6:36 AM
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Wistful lament my dear Sinome
tugs at the heart strings; anyone who has every loved and lost can relate; very well done my freind; many blessings and thanks
posted by
mariaki
on August 11, 2008 at 3:28 AM
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oh dear...please leave the sadness zone to me my dear...this is far too wrenching...so beautifully laid but heartrending. Hope all is well dear one.
posted by
__Purple_Mermaid11__
on August 10, 2008 at 11:30 PM
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