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Ciel...
I'm not sure what happened...just that those first few lines recently popped into me head and I said "Ooooooo...I gotta get that down!"
posted by
Afzal_Sunny7
on August 11, 2008 at 8:49 PM
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By all means, keep the door open...! I will keep reading!
I did wonder if it's something in the air, this dark gothic shade of creativity that is coming up here and there... or if my foray into the darkness has had a stimulating effect on you?
posted by
Ciel
on August 11, 2008 at 4:28 PM
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Afzal...
Thank you so much, sweet love!
posted by
Afzal_Sunny7
on August 11, 2008 at 3:27 PM
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WEll put ...
posted by
afzal50
on August 11, 2008 at 4:39 AM
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Ciel
Your thoughts are always so interesting.
We'll see where it goes, hopefully...
if it goes.
The italics...emphasis...for a few reasons, maybe?
I guess I write it like it's being read out loud... perhaps with eerie emphasis on those words, and perhaps a brief pause after some of them? 
Definitely, not thought about in advance, but entirely made up as I go along. No telling what might happen. I only hope I can connect the dots from day to day. lol
posted by
Afzal_Sunny7
on August 11, 2008 at 1:48 AM
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You're creating something strange and possibly wonderful here...
I get the feeling you are bringing this out of some deep place within, not a calculated sort of writing composed and contrived in the intellect. Nightmarish images, disconnected connects, lateral horror... It'll be interesting to see where you go with it.
One thing I'm not getting is why you are putting some words in italics. Why the italics? Why these particular words? This isn't a suggestion that you shouldn't--you're the creator here, it's your baby! I am just wondering about it.
posted by
Ciel
on August 11, 2008 at 1:12 AM
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Hi Jen...
Maybe... It's right below this piece, dear....just started it yesterday.
posted by
Afzal_Sunny7
on August 10, 2008 at 11:38 PM
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creepy....did I miss part one dear?
posted by
__Purple_Mermaid11__
on August 10, 2008 at 11:20 PM
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