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I like the imagery and I felt this line very deeply:
The ability to bleed; if only I could at times! Bravo! sam
posted by
sam444
on August 13, 2008 at 8:58 AM
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These 'poems of frigidity' are just wonderfully full of such amazing images that I am drawn to each one with a unique eye...yet they flow somehow well together as well....
posted by
NiteTide
on August 12, 2008 at 10:49 PM
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it's the nightmares I can't remember that clash up against my soul
how i ever fall asleep I'll never know
posted by
mysteria
on August 12, 2008 at 10:16 PM
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depth indeed my dear....
posted by
__Purple_Mermaid11__
on August 12, 2008 at 6:57 PM
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Strong Imagery
This poem is full of powerful metaphores, but I didn't connect with it as well as I've connected with some of your other work. I plan to keep reading your stuff though.
posted by
BahamaDave
on August 12, 2008 at 1:27 PM
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Sorry, i got lost.
posted by
Sudanym_
on August 12, 2008 at 9:03 AM
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Powerful
posted by
Lotus_Flower
on August 12, 2008 at 8:38 AM
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