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Fine composition.
posted by
Winged
on August 14, 2008 at 12:07 PM
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Stepping outside oneself can be an eye-opener..well-expressed! - Ash
posted by
ash_pradhan
on August 14, 2008 at 8:12 AM
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Hmmm....to go beyond the obvious...is a realm a lot of us sometimes are too lazy to find...or too scared to find. But the emotions in this poem are beautifully intense and I felt my own curiosity peaking at the emotion of this poem!
posted by
NiteTide
on August 13, 2008 at 8:03 PM
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What interests me about this poem is that the obvious is what it is if you know about it. But if you don't, then you got to wonder about it, and try to construct the dimensions. This would be like Zeno's line--if you keep dividing it in half, you'd never reach the other end of the stadium.
posted by
jfm32
on August 13, 2008 at 5:21 PM
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This is wonderful! I especially liked: To see beyond the obvious
Is my intense curiosity. How often we just ignore this! sam
posted by
sam444
on August 13, 2008 at 1:10 PM
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Great visuals =)
posted by
FelDecot
on August 13, 2008 at 1:09 PM
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Curiosity killed the cat...
I am quite fond of life's mysteries
posted by
Lotus_Flower
on August 13, 2008 at 12:21 PM
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Merkie
posted by
Troosha
on August 13, 2008 at 12:00 PM
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Quite interesting!
Great work!
posted by
Afzal_Sunny7
on August 13, 2008 at 11:13 AM
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