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This is class your words have class. Deep insight.
posted by
Mystereo
on December 15, 2008 at 7:17 PM
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thank you- there is nothing like the beauty of a flower
posted by
Smittenheimer
on September 17, 2008 at 3:00 PM
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moving words
posted by
pelagus
on September 8, 2008 at 12:14 AM
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Beautiful haiku I read a few.

posted by
merkie
on August 31, 2008 at 9:33 PM
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Re: I really like this, Naut...
Thanks, Chuck, and you're absolutely right...

posted by
Nautikos
on August 19, 2008 at 5:10 AM
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I really like this, Naut...
...and it works just as well for something more intimate.
posted by
metalrat
on August 16, 2008 at 1:04 PM
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Thank you, Sinome, and I think you're right! That cactus is really a study in contrast...

posted by
Nautikos
on August 15, 2008 at 6:30 AM
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Tank you very much, Sis Shelly...


posted by
Nautikos
on August 15, 2008 at 6:28 AM
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Re: Naut......
LOL, Corbin! Awesome haiku! I haven't gone over to the dark side, I am just revealing the dark side of my schizoid nature...
posted by
Nautikos
on August 15, 2008 at 6:25 AM
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Thanks, TAPS!

posted by
Nautikos
on August 15, 2008 at 6:23 AM
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Re: It is just amazing, well done
Thanks, Kay!
posted by
Nautikos
on August 15, 2008 at 6:23 AM
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Re: What an amazing plant Naut!
Thanks, Bel!

posted by
Nautikos
on August 15, 2008 at 6:22 AM
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Just amazing Naut...the picture I mean...so beautiful, the harshness of the cactus next to the beauty of the exquisite flower... so like many people I know with two sides that contrast with one another... and the Haiku is wonderful...totally and accurately depicts what we are seeing. Bravo!!!
posted by
Sinome
on August 14, 2008 at 7:45 PM
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You captures this so very exquisitely! I was so involved and didn't want it to end! Bravo my Bro! Shelly

posted by
sam444
on August 14, 2008 at 3:26 PM
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Naut......
This is the first time I've noticed this blog! Have you gone over to the "dark side"???
A man named Naut
seeking rhyme for his reason
left reason behind
just kidding.....you're pretty darned good!
posted by
Corbin_Dallas
on August 14, 2008 at 5:17 AM
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No reason at all. It is gorgeous.
posted by
TAPS.
on August 14, 2008 at 1:23 AM
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It is just amazing, well done
posted by
Kayzzaman
on August 13, 2008 at 11:41 PM
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What an amazing plant Naut!
It fits perfectly with the verse.
posted by
Bel_
on August 13, 2008 at 8:41 PM
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