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Bel
i'm glad my poetry touches you personally.

there'll be more poems like this one, i promise!
posted by
Luz_Briar
on August 16, 2008 at 12:37 PM
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You write
with such intense emotions. you never fail to stir my own emotions.
posted by
Bel_
on August 16, 2008 at 12:13 PM
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Bhask, Purple, and Rumored
Thanks again for reading. I tried to spice things up by writing a sonnet in the midst of all the gloom-and-doom
posted by
Luz_Briar
on August 16, 2008 at 11:36 AM
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Luz, it is beautiful, and much gentler than the other poems in this
collection...

..
posted by
Rumor
on August 16, 2008 at 7:45 AM
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and it is very beautiful my dear....out pouring of heart. Awesome work.



posted by
__Purple_Mermaid11__
on August 16, 2008 at 1:24 AM
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Aw, loved it, loved the sonnet, loved the whole, simply loved it Luz.
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
on August 15, 2008 at 8:50 PM
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not as sarcastic as most of the poems in the 'Frigidity' collection. it was written about unrequited love/infatuation. and, yes, it follows the rules of the traditional sonnet. unless, i've been taught incorrectly, which is always possible
posted by
Luz_Briar
on August 15, 2008 at 12:20 PM
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