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Incredulous imagery and poignant story! sam
posted by
sam444
on August 16, 2008 at 5:05 PM
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Re: Gun Control
No it isnt about me. . . though I read all the time in the paper and see on the news how children get a hold of their parents guns and play with them. . .Thank you.
posted by
Annicita
on August 16, 2008 at 12:46 PM
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My reaction mirrored Mermaid's exactly. You wrote this so well that I was fearful you were writing of your own loss...

- Chris
posted by
Marineair
on August 16, 2008 at 3:43 AM
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oh my dear, this is so gripping....cruelty of fate is so devastating...I hope it is about someone else dear...

though you write very expressively.Bless you.




posted by
__Purple_Mermaid11__
on August 16, 2008 at 1:50 AM
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Excellent! Very well written
posted by
Kayzzaman
on August 15, 2008 at 9:26 PM
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