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i like this one exceptionally. strung together very well
posted by
Luz_Briar
on August 19, 2008 at 5:59 PM
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wonderful quote and magic colors thank you mermaid dear
posted by mysteria on August 18, 2008 at 12:55 PM | | reply |
posted by
__Purple_Mermaid11__
on August 19, 2008 at 1:23 AM
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posted by
shelly_b
on August 18, 2008 at 7:08 PM
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. i just didn't get it.
posted by
Sudanym_
on August 18, 2008 at 3:52 PM
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your words are so powerful!!
Solita
posted by
mothernature
on August 18, 2008 at 3:22 PM
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encouraging us to search our faith for strength is a very encouraging, powerful, and true message....love your poetry Purple Mermaid!
posted by
mejustme
on August 18, 2008 at 1:28 PM
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My faith is living ...
... not in any religious system direction but, living within the framework we call life - stretching to beyond the "other side".
Your poem sparks of intense emotional and scary abysses. I belive it's to let go and be guided by my inner wisdom, my inner guide(s) - 
- genio
posted by
ggXpress
on August 18, 2008 at 8:50 AM
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I concur with Ariala !
posted by
afzal50
on August 18, 2008 at 8:38 AM
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Good message...
posted by
Ariala
on August 18, 2008 at 6:28 AM
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My dear Jen..........
there is always a light if we but look for it; many blessings and thanks always
posted by
mariaki
on August 18, 2008 at 4:39 AM
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As always beauty in sadness and the Light will always shine
posted by
skye08
on August 18, 2008 at 2:20 AM
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This is one of the most amazing of your poems, and the feeling evoked through words are dot perfect. Wonderful work, so Purple-like in the beauty of its message.
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
on August 18, 2008 at 12:36 AM
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Yes Jen, there is a light in all of us that lights our way, we just have to look for it and like the song says, let it shine :-) Beautiful poem.
posted by
Sinome
on August 17, 2008 at 11:01 PM
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Lovely!
posted by
Kayzzaman
on August 17, 2008 at 10:11 PM
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So much truth in your words luv. Search within and find the Faith.
posted by
Kabu
on August 17, 2008 at 10:00 PM
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