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Re: merkie
Thanks - glad you like this one, I had such clear image when writing this

posted by lionreign on August 23, 2008 at 12:48 AM | link to this | reply

Superb! Imagining the dance goes from head to fo feet! the rhythm of life tugs !

posted by merkie on August 20, 2008 at 8:55 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Sam444
not wanting it to end is a huge compliment, thank you

posted by lionreign on August 19, 2008 at 4:15 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Marineair
Thanks Chris - I guess I am feeling a little darker than normal, huh?

posted by lionreign on August 19, 2008 at 4:14 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Ahhh - to be one of those who shed our inhibition and
It would be nice, wouldn't it?

posted by lionreign on August 19, 2008 at 4:14 AM | link to this | reply

Re: So profound ...
thanks

posted by lionreign on August 19, 2008 at 4:13 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Nicely done my friend
Thank you, dear one, I am glad you enjoyed it

posted by lionreign on August 19, 2008 at 4:13 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Very well expressed
Thank you

posted by lionreign on August 19, 2008 at 4:12 AM | link to this | reply

Wow! I love this poem. I was captivated and I didn't want it to end! Superb!  sam

posted by sam444 on August 18, 2008 at 5:05 PM | link to this | reply

Make colour scald and beauty burn

Now THAT'S how you write a dark line...nice job!!!

posted by Marineair on August 18, 2008 at 3:31 PM | link to this | reply

Ahhh - to be one of those who shed our inhibition and
And become one of those who dance.  

posted by Troosha on August 18, 2008 at 7:49 AM | link to this | reply

So profound ...

posted by afzal50 on August 18, 2008 at 7:05 AM | link to this | reply

Nicely done my friend
flowing with imagery; many blessings and thanks

posted by mariaki on August 18, 2008 at 5:21 AM | link to this | reply

Very well expressed

posted by Kayzzaman on August 18, 2008 at 4:38 AM | link to this | reply