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Patman
it's just about how people favor concrete thought over abstract. i wouldnt get it either if i didnt write it
posted by
Luz_Briar
on August 18, 2008 at 10:30 PM
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wow so much imagery and emotions are in here my dear....



posted by
__Purple_Mermaid11__
on August 18, 2008 at 9:14 PM
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Poignant and laden with great imagery! I especially liked:
Keep it for yourself, Concrete. Excellent! sam
posted by
sam444
on August 18, 2008 at 5:34 PM
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i don' get it but this the 3rd one in a row i didn't get.
posted by
Sudanym_
on August 18, 2008 at 4:05 PM
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Excellent, very well written
posted by
Kayzzaman
on August 18, 2008 at 4:48 AM
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