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You make me wonder if ...
... I've landed on wrong planet ... 'cause it looks as deep feelings are in short here -
- genio
posted by
ggXpress
on August 20, 2008 at 11:23 AM
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Beautiful !
posted by
merkie
on August 20, 2008 at 9:37 AM
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Excellent work!
posted by
Katray2
on August 20, 2008 at 7:13 AM
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Some lovely phrasing here my dear Jen
beautifully done as always; many blessings and thanks
posted by
mariaki
on August 20, 2008 at 5:51 AM
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So true
It is only the touch of love that brings us into reality
posted by
skye08
on August 19, 2008 at 10:43 PM
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purple
Very nice, but I used a phrase you had in here and didnt know it, so dont think I copied you
posted by
Lanetay
on August 19, 2008 at 9:48 PM
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Never give up on love...
...is the message I read here. Even after disappointment and sorrow there is always hope. Lovely work - that's something I can believe in.
posted by
resurrectionman
on August 19, 2008 at 8:45 PM
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Beautifully sensual... superb poem. Bravo!
posted by
Sinome
on August 19, 2008 at 7:51 PM
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wow....
posted by
mejustme
on August 19, 2008 at 7:38 PM
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nice poem. a kiss certainly feels good.
posted by
Pedro88
on August 19, 2008 at 6:18 PM
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we have myths, and myths have us. wonderfully said, Mermaid
posted by
Luz_Briar
on August 19, 2008 at 6:05 PM
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