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I have to admit
I did not entirely understand this poem but I enjoyed its rhythm and flow
posted by
mejustme
on August 21, 2008 at 4:52 PM
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I think my brain is bleeding
From the magnificence of this piece, it keeps running through my head - great work!
posted by
lionreign
on August 21, 2008 at 6:49 AM
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Sam is right...this needs to be read and re-read to get the greatness of it. A work of art, pictures and all. Good work!
posted by
Sinome
on August 20, 2008 at 8:22 PM
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haunting...such reverberating piece...very well crafted my dear.
posted by
__Purple_Mermaid11__
on August 20, 2008 at 7:31 PM
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What a great trail to follow on this epiphany! I loved this:
Throughout this epiphany. It was a great set up for the imagery that followed. There are so many wonderful lines! I read it twice! The second time was astonishing! sam
posted by
sam444
on August 20, 2008 at 6:37 PM
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Re: The combination of words and pictures is very impactful!!!
thanks, Resurrection. Photobucket is a wonderful thing
posted by
Luz_Briar
on August 20, 2008 at 6:08 PM
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The combination of words and pictures is very impactful!!!
posted by
resurrectionman
on August 20, 2008 at 5:16 PM
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Plucking
probably my personal favorite in the Frigidity poems. Though opened to interpretation, it was
not written about sexual intercourse, though I realize how much it must sound so. Hope you enjoyed!
posted by
Luz_Briar
on August 20, 2008 at 4:36 PM
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