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I can't help but feel a little Langston Hughes in this outstanding poem! Love you! sam
posted by
sam444
on August 28, 2008 at 1:42 PM
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lestate
Don't think you'll be invited to write any tourist brochures!
Great piece!
posted by
Troosha
on August 28, 2008 at 9:03 AM
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I have alays loved the way you write. I missed you while you were gone and I am ever so glad you are back. This one is great, Absolutely fabulous.
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Sinome
on August 27, 2008 at 9:46 PM
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Excellent description of a possible(not) California dream. I lived in Northern California 15yrs.
It's a lot different then L.A.
Very Creative!
posted by
yellowrose55
on August 27, 2008 at 7:14 PM
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