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You Are A Master of Language
What I love about your poetry is the masterful way you use words that I don't ordinarily see, yet you use them in ways that are appropriate and flow off the tongue into a beautiful poem. Well done!
posted by
freelance_ghost
on August 29, 2008 at 8:25 PM
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looks like we are in the same mode, love the pics
posted by
Lanetay
on August 29, 2008 at 7:21 PM
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"only the 'eye' can behold" the repetition works splendidly here
posted by
Luz_Briar
on August 29, 2008 at 5:13 PM
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Your poems are small fairy-tales ...
... filled with mystic and magic occurrences where all kinds of forces play their games gainst and together with each other - excellent and narrativ -
- genio
posted by
ggXpress
on August 29, 2008 at 11:37 AM
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Eyes are helpless observers indeed ...
posted by
afzal50
on August 29, 2008 at 10:44 AM
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This sends a dual message to me. I see the inner response to what we observe and yet sense the watchfulness of the univesrse carrying us through all calamity and also contented times. Omnipotent omnipresence. Thanks for sharing your wisdom.
posted by
merkie
on August 29, 2008 at 9:33 AM
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Very lovely, ideed, Mermaid!
posted by
strat
on August 29, 2008 at 9:00 AM
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Powerfully expressed wisdom!
posted by
Katray2
on August 29, 2008 at 8:09 AM
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Excellent my dear Jen
but even with our eyes closed we can see so much if not more than when they are open! Many blessings and thanks my friend always; have a wonderful week ahead
posted by
mariaki
on August 29, 2008 at 4:48 AM
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Beauty is in the eye of the beholder... we see what we want to see
posted by
Lotus_Flower
on August 29, 2008 at 12:24 AM
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deep
what's next to see...what if what you see is what it is
posted by
YBSP1
on August 28, 2008 at 11:11 PM
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Superb ... and beautiful as always Jen.
posted by
Sinome
on August 28, 2008 at 9:41 PM
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Excellent!!!!!!!
posted by
Star5_
on August 28, 2008 at 7:35 PM
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Wow...
this was beautiful, I really enjoyed it...
posted by
celiaeli
on August 28, 2008 at 7:25 PM
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