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Great impact
I like this one a lot!
posted by
lionreign
on September 1, 2008 at 2:30 AM
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hmmnn...some upset moments dear... well expressed!





posted by
__Purple_Mermaid11__
on August 31, 2008 at 2:45 AM
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Luz, powerful stuff..I feel the hostility and come away from reading
feeling like I've been slapped in the face..



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posted by
Rumor
on August 30, 2008 at 6:21 PM
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Hostility can be something else! sam
posted by
sam444
on August 30, 2008 at 1:35 PM
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CAMOE
thanks. you can bet i'm evacuating!
posted by
Luz_Briar
on August 30, 2008 at 11:23 AM
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Rivalry
I like this and will be looking for your work. Good luck with Gustav!
posted by
CAMOE
on August 30, 2008 at 10:33 AM
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