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such well-fitting words (:
posted by
ain_natasha
on June 22, 2010 at 6:55 PM
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Sinome
You have captured it brilliantly - the world a reflection of the soul's turmoil...
posted by
Nautikos
on June 22, 2010 at 6:18 PM
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more beauty from dear Simone so many tears.....I used to cry in the
shower when my heart was broken that way no one could see.
posted by
Kabu
on June 22, 2010 at 6:01 PM
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Never seeing that special someone again can be a traumatic thought.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on June 22, 2010 at 5:41 PM
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I am not use to lightening and thunder something about it make is romantic
posted by
Lanetay
on September 3, 2008 at 5:55 AM
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The "pounding rain" makes everything new and washes away the old. Painfully beautiful poem.
posted by
yellowrose55
on September 2, 2008 at 8:53 PM
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Oh, I hate goodbyes
So beautifully written, Sinome.
posted by
Afzal_Sunny7
on September 2, 2008 at 8:08 PM
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I was so taken at what you saw in the storm. A myraid of thoughts went through my head and yet I stayed focused on the imagery. And to close with: and all that's left of my fears
is the thought of your good-bye.
It leaves a lump in my throat for we know we must say good-bye and yet the fear is overwhelming! An excellent poem. sam
Sidebar: (I was also drawn to just good-byes to things in general. Maybe I am affected because I would love to keep my house, it is just in the wrong place. I am irritable because of it! I know sad, but I just got everything the way I wanted it and the stress the area I live in is too much!) Thanks for listening darlin' xoxo
posted by
sam444
on September 2, 2008 at 8:07 PM
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Nothing like it.
posted by
CAMOE
on September 2, 2008 at 7:56 PM
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Sinome, a storm has a balm all its own..and the "wall" of rain it brings
can reflect and/or imitate our tears if we are saddened..
...
posted by
Rumor
on September 2, 2008 at 7:27 PM
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posted by
Star5_
on September 2, 2008 at 7:15 PM
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Emotion and sense in a flash love!With TLC, BCA, “top of the stairs” 
posted by
BC-A
on September 2, 2008 at 3:10 PM
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The inside mirrors the outside ...
... and vice versa ... how long will it take before tears will stop, if they ever will stop ... or ... is it possible to meet life on a level of understanding and gratitude that tell tears give pain too much power ? - first ... I believe ... we have to give our soul its right value - - genio
posted by
ggXpress
on September 2, 2008 at 1:08 PM
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Sinome
Isn’t it amazing how when we observe – closely and consciously observe – the weather it can invoke all kinds of emotions. In this case you’ve allowed the storm to cleanse your anger and sorrow. So very beautifully done but then you never disappoint.
posted by
Troosha
on September 2, 2008 at 8:19 AM
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Only this morning was I thinking about writing a poem about "Wind", its many forms and what emotions it brings out. A wonderful poem my dear, no doubt inspired by the thunderstorms raging over our beloved Miami Beach!!! Only 2 months to go and I'm back.
posted by
vogue
on September 2, 2008 at 7:23 AM
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Simone
Poignant! The storm reflecting the state of your soul...
posted by
Nautikos
on September 2, 2008 at 6:14 AM
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Fabulously written
Beautiful and tragic... I am left with the urge to send the warmest of hugs
posted by
lionreign
on September 2, 2008 at 4:40 AM
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Intense emotions storm my senses.
Excellence again dear poetess!
posted by
merkie
on September 1, 2008 at 8:13 PM
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rain never ceases to bring out emotions in us indeed my love...It was like I was right by that window my dear one...this is beautiful....
posted by
__Purple_Mermaid11__
on September 1, 2008 at 7:44 PM
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