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Your poetry and the photoes
I wish I had more time to read all of them. But from what I've read, they are written beautifully, so are the pictures. Keep on writing!
posted by
Baf4yoo
on October 12, 2008 at 11:01 AM
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I feel your emotion for this person love! Excellent!With TLC, BCA, “top of the stairs” 
posted by
BC-A
on September 2, 2008 at 3:04 PM
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Purple Mermaid
This heartfelt poem reminds me of some dreams that I occasionally have, in which there's a sense of impending loss. Not happy dreams, but they sure do reveal the value of that which is being dreamed of. After awakening, they often compel me to do or say things during my day which I otherwise might not have. Your poem could have the same effect...
posted by
McKnife
on September 2, 2008 at 2:12 PM
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Purple
This could be interpreted as reaching out for someone who we’re losing touch with or reaching out for a part of our self which we’ve lost. I read it like the latter and enjoyed it.
posted by
Troosha
on September 2, 2008 at 8:35 AM
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One has to cross all barriers to be one ...
posted by
afzal50
on September 2, 2008 at 4:34 AM
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Very well done, J! Excellent!
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on September 1, 2008 at 11:59 PM
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I`m so glad I finlly got my proper internet connection at home so I can read your poetry without being thrwon out half way through. Quite often, there is a lot of sadness in your writing, a feeling that appeals because it is never without hope.
posted by
vogue
on September 1, 2008 at 10:51 PM
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great stuff
posted by
Katherine_Ann
on September 1, 2008 at 8:49 PM
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Great write; memories of a relationship lost
a journey began in pain and saddness but led to a higher plane and far more happiness and self esteem
posted by
skye08
on September 1, 2008 at 8:38 PM
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Fears and loss float through your poem
to worry and instinct in understanding.
Awesome write.You have me thinking again!
posted by
merkie
on September 1, 2008 at 8:19 PM
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